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          She looked beautiful. Never in all of the young mans short life had he ever seen such beauty.
          Her amber hair was lifted into a simple bun with the bangs falling over her ears, framing her gorgeous face and two bright blue eyes. The assortment of bright lights contrasted with her eyes seeming to make them glow.
          He found he could lose himself in thoose endless oceans of blue, thoose delicate amber curls. Looking at her was as if looking at perfection...
          She elegantly strode over to him each step seeming to take an eternity as he watched her graceful form move. Her simple dark green dress draped over her shoulders and torso before falling paist her waist in endless folds, appearing to make her float instead of walk. An angel was the only word he could find to describe her...and even that did not come close to how she truely looked to him.
          The soft music began too fill the air as she finnaly aproached him.
          "May I have this dance..." He bowed gracefully as he gently took her hand.She smiled then.
          Ahhh, that smile. The smile that knotted his stomach. The smile that dizzied him. The smile that always seem to make his tiny world feel right...The only thing that seemed to make his small world feel right...
          She locked fingers in the hand he now held in his own, and gently placed the other onto his shoulder. He placed his own free hand onto her lower back gently pulling her chest against his. He could feel the weakness in his knees as he felt the warmth of her body begin to flood his. Then as he ever so slightly tilted his head down he found himself staring into thoose blue depths once more, and he found his stmach knotting again. And following the beat of the music the two began to move, one foot slowly falling in place after the other. As he moved with her their bodies seemed to become one. The two forms slowly merging, following the beat of the gently playing music. The whole time their eyes never leaving one anothers.
          As the two continued to move in an elegant circle the young man found his heart beating faster and faster, as it often did when she was near. And he looked at her face and saw the smallest blush and the slightest parting of hers pink lips and he found his own face leaning closer to hers.
          He realized then and there the absolute perfection of this moment. He could feel the small warmth of her breaths against his face. He realized then just how much she meant to him. Their lips were only inches apart. He realized then he loved her...And just as there lips were about to meet....he opened his eyes and saw only the darkness of his bedroom.
          He sprung up arms sweeping in front of him in an effort, although hopless one, to catch his angel before she vanished completly. But he grasped only at air...
          It was a dream. Just a dream. He closed his eyes and asighed deeply. Only a dream....
©2008-2009 ~KiNgFRoStY187183
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OK so i know i should probably be working on my story but i dont know why but i really wanted to write this for some reason. Probly cause im having a sorta bad weekend...but yeah. this is my first real piece of writing ive ever submitted so be gentle with grammar and what not hope you enjoy and please COMMENT!!
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wow that was absolutely beautiful :)

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life is a succession of moments to live each one is to succeed ;)
Wonderful! I had extreme difficulty with my first story posted, many people criticized me, and on most of them I only got two or three views, because I didn't write what the people "wanted." But this is extremly good.

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I look withoutSeeing, for I am BLIND
I listen without hearing, for I am DEAF
I talk without Speaking, for I am MUTE
I live without The beat of a heart, for I am DEAD
Thanks very much. as i said i have never really posted any real writing before so im glad someone enjoyed it. :D

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"If life was full of only good things what would be the point of living? We as people live through the hard things to enjoy the few good things even more."
Your welcome, take a look at my gallery, some of them are better than others, but hey, I'm a budding author, it's only right to share my work, crappy or no, right?

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I look withoutSeeing, for I am BLIND
I listen without hearing, for I am DEAF
I talk without Speaking, for I am MUTE
I live without The beat of a heart, for I am DEAD
i think i just might ^^ and if its something you really enjoy keep at it you just may make some money from it someday

and see my gallery as well dont have much writing but i have lots of drawings

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"If life was full of only good things what would be the point of living? We as people live through the hard things to enjoy the few good things even more."
thank you very much :D

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"If life was full of only good things what would be the point of living? We as people live through the hard things to enjoy the few good things even more."
Yeah, they're god as well. I can't draw, people have been telling me that it's just that way. There will always be someone better than you and badder than you, so be happy with what you have. Ms. Rife said that everyone has one unique talent, some peoplle have musical talents, some are academic prodigists, some can write and some can draw. But my talent orbits the creative part, and doesn't move, so I deal with it. Wishing I could draw some of my story characters. Ah well.

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I look withoutSeeing, for I am BLIND
I listen without hearing, for I am DEAF
I talk without Speaking, for I am MUTE
I live without The beat of a heart, for I am DEAD
Aw, why was it just a dream -cries-

Some of the descriptions were really good!

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“A word of advice from one Reaper to another,” Kyniel took a defensive stance, “never let your ego get the best of you.”
The Realm Within
well it was a dream cause well i didnt feel like writing a happy story really

and thanks i tried to be very descriptive in this one ^^

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"If life was full of only good things what would be the point of living? We as people live through the hard things to enjoy the few good things even more."

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